music remix input

[Major_A]

I didn't mean to start this topic in the other thread, it just kind of ran together with the previous post and it was getting late and for some reason during winter time here, a fly decided to show up and totally urinate me off and dare me to try and kill it, and forced me to become fixated on it. My guess is the kids are taking food upstairs again.

Anyway, this side of the purple line is basically what it said, minus my whinny stuff, and drama I was going through. These new work hrs are really getting to me...And no, I never got the fly, I just got yelled at for makeing a bunch of noise.

This first one has no sfx added, it's just a generic mashup. Just give me your thoughts on this first attempt and keep in mind like your playing MOH <-Mo-Haa->, COD, Flight sim, or something else and give me your thoughts.

[/bowing]__Master Lamron__ [/unbowing] Thanks for the group name!
www.10webs.com/digitalmilitia/Majors/testing_remix/MajorFearfinaltemp1.mp3

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Just got this one done for now.
This second one is the song itself with all the whinny stuff cut out and kept the hard beat. It's short right now, and has a space at the end, but how's it sound so far and/or what does it need?

If anyone knows of a song with a similar beat and has a mosh sounding guitar/drum thing going, let me know what it is.

www.10webs.com/digitalmilitia/Majors/testing_remix/MajortotalFearfinaltemp2.mp3